Cut the Clutter: Revising for Concision and Voice
Students match wordy phrases to concise versions, cut redundant sentences, switch passive to active voice and rewrite a flat sentence with vivid voice.
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Students match wordy phrases to concise versions, cut redundant sentences, switch passive to active voice and rewrite a flat sentence with vivid voice.
Students learn six dialogue-punctuation rules, choose the correctly punctuated sentences, fix four errors, and write a short conversation of their own.
Students fix punctuation errors in sample dialogue, learn action beats, and write a short conversation in which one character wants something.
Students read an original speech to a town council, label each sentence as ethos, pathos or logos, and write appeals of their own.
Students identify the four sentence types, add end marks, rewrite sentences into new types and write one of each about a school field day.
Students match the five parts of a friendly letter, fix greeting and closing punctuation, and write a thank-you letter to someone who helped them.
Students use a reference chart of common Greek and Latin roots to match, complete and invent vocabulary words.
Students read an original science article about echolocation and answer questions on main idea, evidence and cause and effect.
Students read an original informational passage about honeybee communication and identify the structure and purpose of each paragraph.
Students sort eight fact cards about honeybee colonies into useful and off-topic, then turn the useful facts into a well-organized informative paragraph.
Students read an original informational text about the invention of braille, build a timeline, and match causes to effects.
Students read a short original story, map how the main character changes in three stages, and then plan an arc for a character they know.